Booking Through Thursday 7/31

Today’s question from Booking Through Thursday is:

What is your favorite ending line of a book?

My favorite part about finishing a book isn’t always the end line itself, but the dreamy, unfocused sensation of turning the last page, realizing it’s the last page, and sorting out the emotional tangle of having been vividly in the book’s world. 

More than the specific last lines themselves, I remember, love, and reread books that lure me in so deeply, then give me the disconnected, jolted feeling of leaving their world when the last page is turned. 

Some that come to mind: 

Tam Lin, by Pamela Dean

Speaker for the Dead- Orson Scott Card

Callahan’s Secret- Spider Robinson

Beauty- Robin McKinley

Sunshine- Robin McKinley

I should think about this more, though, and pay attention to books’ last lines more, instead of the emotional imprint they leave

Published in: on July 31, 2008 at 8:38 pm Comments (2)
Tags:

Hello to Another Elizabeth!

I am thrilled to see another Elizabeth, a college friend, starting a blog. She’s a fantastic writer (in the sense of skill, and also the sense of magic that permeates her fiction.) And the first post is, frankly, lovely. I’ve never read The Lady of Shalott. Perhaps I should.

More on this later, but I have an idea taking shape- to get friends, and writers I admire to do guest posts on my blog, riffing on books, reading, writing and language. I am lucky enough to have wonderful conversations with these writers and readers and thinkers- in the real world, and online.   I’m getting some of them to join the conversation over here. I will be introducing guest bloggers and book reviewers here in the next few months.

Published in: on July 28, 2008 at 4:38 am Comments (2)
Tags: , , , ,

Lazy Sundays are the best

There really is nothing better than a lazy Sunday morning stretched out in bed with a good book, coffee at my elbow.  I’m reading James Herriot’s biography.  It makes me very happy.

Published in: on July 27, 2008 at 2:46 pm Leave a Comment

Explaining Football to a Female Audience

I am re-reading and rethinking a book I read about a year ago. Get Your Own Damn Beer, I’m Watching the Game!: A Woman’s Guide to Loving Pro Football
Holly Robinson  Peete explains football to a female audience. She’s addressing women who want to learn football so that they know what the men in their lives are talking about when they watch games. At the time I read it, I wanted a clear, concise guide to the basic principles of football. And I remember feeling a little rattled, and perplexed by her prose.

At the time, I was looking for a clear, concise guide to football. And, while there were certainly well explained elements, I found her prose style off-putting. Digressions about cute mascots, football players’ tight butts, and descriptions of watching football “with your man” bothered me. Her prose was kind of giggly and frivolous. It made me feel like a woman would only be watching football to connect with her husband or her boyfriend- not because the games are fun to watch and understand.

Here is where I sheepishly have to admit that the whole reason that I was reading the book in the first place was… you guessed it… so I could watch football with my boyfriend! So maybe just a touch defensive in my initial grumbling about her giggly prose?

That said- I am gearing up for this year’s fantasy football season as a single woman who became an avid fan over the course of last year. I’m rereading Holly Anderson Peete, and thinking her book isn’t that bad. I still find Girlfriend’s Guide to Football (Girlfriend’s Guide to…)
is a more straightforward read, but Get Your Own Damn Beer isn’t bad as an additional resource.

While we’re on the subject of good writing about football, check out this story my cousin, Michael Reilly wrote for The New Scientist.

Trying New Writing Styles

I started taking a class with Mediabistro.com.  How to write for the glossy women’s magazines.  I find it fascinating, and terrific fun.  I hope to branch out to doing more, different kinds of writing, working freelance for glossy magazines.  I am learning how to research stories and pitch them, and getting more comfortable with interviewing.

I think the most interesting part of the class, though, is the attention to writing style.  Julia, the instructor, describes the style for women’s magazine writing as “girlfriend to girlfriend.”  She notes that women’s magazine editors will reword, or omit big, weighty vocab words in favor of more streamlined, accessible prose.

While I’m having tremendous fun exploring a range of features topics, I also notice that the biggest challenge, and the greatest resource so far, is that attention to writing style.  I would like to pick up more of the elements of women’s magazine easygoing, accessible prose.  I hope that it makes my own writing clearer and more conversational.   I do read a range of women’s magazines (now with a more critical and curious eye) and I do notice how accessible and interesting the language makes the topics.

Laptop News: Potentially Interesting to Freelance Writers

This appeared in the NY Times a few days ago, just as I am pondering getting a laptop of my own. Talking about the trend towards smaller, lighter, cheaper laptops, and the impact on the computer industry at large.

Call me cynical, but I’m wondering whether a follow-up story to “increased popularity of tiny laptops” will be “rate of carpal tunnel increasing.”

I still think I want a small, cheap, laptop though. So I can write, and blog in the sunshine.

Published in: on July 25, 2008 at 5:02 pm Leave a Comment
Tags: ,

Booking Through Thursday

Booking Through Thursday. Haven’t done one of these in a long time.

“What are your favourite first sentences from books? Is there a book that you liked specially because of its first sentence? Or a book, perhaps that you didn’t like but still remember simply because of the first line?”

I’m trying to think of “favorite first lines” and what’s coming to mind isn’t my favorite line, but a first line I remember my cousin Dan reading to me, from John Irving’s “Cider House Rules” because it just blew him away:

“In the hospital of the orphanage– the boys’ division at St. Cloud’s, Maine, two nurses were in charge of naming the new babies and checking that their little penises were healing from the obligatory circumcision.”

I remember him reading that aloud to me, and then exclaiming over how many details, about the orphanage, and about the themes of the book itself, were packed, condensed into that first sentence.

Still trying to think of my own favorite line, though.  I should keep better track of really good first lines as I read.


Published in: on July 24, 2008 at 12:48 pm Comments (7)
Tags: ,

To Read Next

Biography of the Real James Herriot just came in from the library!

Inkspell, by Cornelia Funke.  I’ve had that out from the library for ages, but have been reading Shantaram.

I’m thinking of reading either a book typically assigned in high school English classes, or a much-hyped book that “everyone’s reading” and then blogging as I go.  Any suggestions for titles?

And I have a few that need reviewing, as always.

What a delicious feast of books!

Shantaram (quasi-review)

Has anyone else out there in the bookish blogosphere read Shantaram, by Gregory David Roberts? I’m working my way through it. 900 pages of fast-moving story doesn’t necessarily feel like 900 pages, but it is still taking a while to read. And I’m not reviewing it for any publication I work for- I picked it up at Partners and Crime, one of my favorite bookstores.

I’m looking for a word to capture the writing style. Shantaram may be a memoir. It may be fiction. It may be a fictionalized, sensationalized memoir. The author is perfectly candid about a few facts that his biography seems to bear out. He escaped an Australian prison, and fled to Bombay. He was later captured, and sentenced to serve the remainder of his jail time. While he was in jail the second time, he wrote this book. Who can really say, except the author, how much is memoir (which has its own departures from the objective truth) and how much is an imaginative construct.

Also, remembering my own studies of anthropology, particularly Reading National Geographic, I have to wonder if being a white man in the slums of Bombay creates its own fictional slants and roles to play. The reason I’m reaching out to others who have read this excellent book is tied up with that perception as well. I want to know if others find that some of Roberts’ language drifts close to smirking and smug.  Many passages are beautiful.  (Some descriptions, verging on the poetic, get a little self conscious with glorious imagery.)   Ideally, I would love to dig around in the text with someone else who has studied anthropology, and see if I’m over-analyzing, or using rusty, faulty logic too much. I want a second opinion.

I also need to remember that, by positioning the narrative voice between philosopher and criminal, the prose is  going to be more than a little bit slick at times. And that, for all its odd whiffs of colonialism or counter-colonialism, is what makes a 900 page novel about Bombay’s black market, such a fast-paced read.  It reminds me of “Catch Me If You Can,” by Frank Abagnale- later a Matt Damon movie of the same name.  Very slick prose, in Abagnale’s tale of getting away with all kinds of scams.  Slick, smug prose belonged there.  I think the reason I”m pulled up short, at times by Shantaram is because it’s more than just a slick crime and caper fugitive novel/memoir.  Elements of culture and class come into play in his observations, and the characters who surround him.  The way he can move between the slum and the  million-dollar black market mafia crime world, unquestioned, and unquestioning, has made me pause a few times as I read.  His facility with language is lovely though- particularly the descriptions of Bombay and its people.  This is an engrossing escape novel, for author, characters, and  reader.

Published in: on July 23, 2008 at 1:37 pm Comments (1)
Tags: , , ,

Ate, Prayed, Didn’t Love

I got a copy of Eat, Pray, Love for my birthday. Several people I know have read this and loved it. And, for two of the book’s three sections, I agree. Elizabeth Gilbert’s journey through Italy is full of sumptuous food writing. Her spiritual journey in Italy is one I can grasp: she’s surrounded by the beauty of art and good food, and wrestling with giving herself permission to find happiness, and to feel it. She’s learning to treat herself well, to feel that she deserves good things. After the breakdown of a romance, that can be a long process. She also describes Italy, its art, its food, its people, in sumptuous sensory detail that draws me in. It makes me want to look for flights.

Her section on India resonates for me as well. The way she describes wrestling angrily with her own emotions as she struggles to surrender to meditation practice echoes thoughts I sometimes have. I appreciate her candor, and her vivid imagery, as she describes getting in her own way, and fighting her way towards stillness. Her eventual glimpses of, and surrender to, meditation, is easier to grasp after being invited into the emotional, sometimes angry, spiritual healing process.

From one Elizabeth to another- I found myself reading the first two sections- turning a few corners down on pages, smiling at her images and turns of phrase. I feel that she has both put words to my own feelings, and explored the nuances of her own emotional experience in a way that is uniquely her own.

And then… Indonesia. I realize it was part of her journey, even the part where she found love (that’s not a spoiler, it’s right there in the title after all!) But… I feel like I’ve been mired in this section of the book for months! Yes, she is learning new techniques of meditation from an entertaining, and wise guru- I particularly like the advice of “smile with your whole self- even your liver.” But I feel like she’s progressed to this point, and is coasting through idle (but very pretty tropical) days- and I can’t quite get into reading about whatever spiritual work she has left. So I’ve skimmed the last section, feeling let down, because the first two were so wonderfully engrossing, honest and gorgeously written.